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Me and my self-consciousness by Mordial33
Me and my self-consciousness
I work out a lot and I am proud of my body. So it really frustrates me when people underestimate me and presume that I am, in fact, a scrawny little wimp. Here's the facts: I bench 185 pounds. I deadlift 370. I clean (proper, full front squat and everything) 170. My squat sucks because of tendon damage in my left leg. i.e. 240 on a good day. And i curl 30 pound dumbells in sets of 10:8:6. I am 135 pounds and work at McDonald's. I'm pretty damn strong all things considered.
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'Pon Love, An Esoteric Obium




How oft dost thou lookest to thine heart?
Thy love beest beauty, 'tis beauteous art,
A beacon of light in lovers' dark,
Her name on thy lips in the silence, stark;
Thy love beest beauty, a beauteous art.

How oft hast thou lookest to thine hand?
'Tis red-tinged in color: a rose-stung hand,
Thy blood on the ground doth stain the sand,
A crimson verge from a rose-stung hand,
Thy love beest beauty, an art unplanned.

The Rub'i of Vows Forlorn




The maiden clad in shrouded shades of sorrow sung
To Fate of her yearning while the chapel bells rung,
I swear by these sweet musings my love, 'pon my word:
A song of sweet serenity, with sorrow strung.
Mordial33/shehrozeameen Poem Collabaration
I feel terrible that it took me a month to finally get around to posting this even though :iconshehrozeameen: posted his part such a long time ago. Anyway, whatever, here it is. I have to personally recommend shehrozeameen Not only is he an amazing poet; he is a great friend as well. Check out his gallery. I promise, if you like poetry in any capacity, you will love his work. Here are several that I would like to highlight. Just keep a dictionary nearby. Even I have had some trouble with some of the words he uses and I have an amazing vocabulary lol  :P

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and my personal favorite of his:
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Steven McVicker
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I love playing with the sounds words make and I love to make people happy. Poetry is the best way for me to express myself.

The Galaxy Shall Fear (First Vader Stamp) by Mordial33 Being Different Can Be Fun, But... - Stamp by Natsu714 Icon 4 Mordial33 by Me2Smart4U Falling for Autumn stamp by Mordial33 Real Artists by StampWolf That's my twitchy twitch face guiz lol by RebiValeska SERIOUSLY? by KiraiMirai Words can't hurt, right? by KiraiMirai Dummy Blink Stamp by IamNotcrazyYouare Bookworm by Galialay .: Read the comments :. Stamp by Beti-Kot Thanks4favs by Darkness-Nightguard

The Darth Vader one is my favorite so far!
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There are some people who are getting too fake on dA. They only want posts, comments, or to see how many friends and page views they can get. So let's see who will actually re-post this. This is an experiment to see who's paying attention. This is a test to see how many people in my friends list actually pay attention to me. Copy and re-post in your own journal. Let's see who the real people are. Re-post this if you aren't a fake.

Do not comment in this, just repost this in your journal

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theShadowGrove Featured By Owner 3 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
Thanx for the :+fav:s!
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Mordial33 Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
Also, in response to your signature, I thought of something...My managers at work tell me not to serve food I wouldn't eat myself. Next time they say that, I am going to tell them, "I guess I don't have to make any of the crap on these orders then!" lol And yes, I am aware that that is in no way related to what your signature says but that is just how my mind works: it makes the weirdest jumps of intuition. Or maybe that's just my ADD   0_0
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theShadowGrove Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
Lol it's an Andy Warhol quote
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Mordial33 Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem man. Did you read the comments? lol
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theShadowGrove Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
Comments?
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Mordial33 Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah. The comments I made about the poems I faved. I don't fave without commenting lol
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Kezzi-Rose Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconhello1plz::iconhello2plz:

You've been given a DeviantART Compliment! ♥

:love: Have a wonderful day :love:

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Mordial33 Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for the compliment lol!
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shehrozeameen Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Happy Birthday brother :)
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UnThai Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
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