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An Ode to Autumn

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I sit and write of Autumn,
Of languid Autumn's day;
The breeze blows out the leaves throughout,
Beneath the branches' lazy sway.

I’ll paint your eyes with Autumn,
Show you Autumn's red monsoon;
In frost-strewn fields, the surface yields
Beneath the burning harvest moon.

Of amber Autumn do I write,
And of earthy Autumn's sigh,
Of winds as crisp as winter's wisps
Which dream of warmth before they die.

I sing aloud of Autumn,
Of a deep Autumnal night;
Of leafy mounds, in colors profound
Beneath the frigid starlight.
I made this poem specifically for the Autumn contest for this group...:iconaskmetowriteapoem:

Anyway the contest is over. The poem has been edited to a version I prefer much more that sends a clearer image of what I want you the reader to see. May or may not add more, depends if I have ideas. I feel that there is room to expand on it. Anyway, comment, critique, tell me what you think!
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TheLunaLily's avatar
Lovely! Especially the second to last stanza. That one is my favorite. :heart: